tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1101389180221568079.post1109813969167725835..comments2024-02-21T15:25:42.288+00:00Comments on Daniel Lieske Blog: Chapter 3 - A Monstrous ForestDaniel Lieskehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14606468348038406671noreply@blogger.comBlogger48125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1101389180221568079.post-68467433271335648082013-08-08T03:45:24.345+01:002013-08-08T03:45:24.345+01:00So great :xSo great :xmagento downloadhttp://magentodownload.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1101389180221568079.post-16579959787634871282013-08-02T03:45:27.841+01:002013-08-02T03:45:27.841+01:00It's so wonderful! love it :xIt's so wonderful! love it :xmagento tutorialhttp://magentotutorial.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1101389180221568079.post-56083955928965587032012-05-29T14:57:18.465+01:002012-05-29T14:57:18.465+01:00Well, you seem to like the story so far enough to ...Well, you seem to like the story so far enough to worry about how it's going to continue. :) But seriously, I'm open to criticism of any sort. As far as the story is concerned I'd prefer to receive it AFTER the story has actually been told but I know this is a lot to ask for as this won't be the case anytime soon. So, thanks for the input. I'm working hard on it!Daniel Lieskehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14606468348038406671noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1101389180221568079.post-44298804849722343452012-05-29T14:45:29.771+01:002012-05-29T14:45:29.771+01:00Tatsächlich wird es wohl eher eine eigene portugie...Tatsächlich wird es wohl eher eine eigene portugiesische Übersetzung für Europa geben. Zumindest es das im Moment der Plan.Daniel Lieskehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14606468348038406671noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1101389180221568079.post-18600849092865864582012-05-29T10:41:32.114+01:002012-05-29T10:41:32.114+01:00Hi Daniel,
viele Grüße aus dem benachbarten Biele...Hi Daniel,<br /><br />viele Grüße aus dem benachbarten Bielefeld. Du machst wirklich einen grandiosen Job! Vielen Dank dafür!<br /><br />Mir ist noch aufgefallen, dass es Kapitel 1 auch in portugiesisch gibt, aber nur mit der brasilianischen Flagge dargestellt ist. Da könnte man ja eine geteilte Fahne wie bei Niederlande und Belgien machen, damit sich unsere portugiesischen Freunde nicht benachteiligt fühlen.<br /><br />Viele Grüße!<br />SebastianAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1101389180221568079.post-13348362439082624992012-05-28T11:01:38.701+01:002012-05-28T11:01:38.701+01:00I admire your persistence and discipline to contin...I admire your persistence and discipline to continue such tremendous work over a long period of time. However, I do have some citicism that may be helpful: Some of my friends have pointed out that the story (of which we can't say a lot at this point yet) is a little too bland if it continues to be the way it is now. It's not bad, but not very good either. In my opinion, what your story needs is something outstanding that makes it different from a generic fantasy -(graphic) novel. Maybe you already have something specific in mind, but make sure it is the real thing - right now, nothing in the story has impressed me.<br />This may sound a little harsh, but please take it as an advice of someone who sees a lot of potential in your work and would love to see you succeed. Good luck!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1101389180221568079.post-66949960915942776892012-05-26T11:16:13.580+01:002012-05-26T11:16:13.580+01:00Muss auch gestehen, dass ich mir bei vielen der zu...Muss auch gestehen, dass ich mir bei vielen der zusätzlichen Beschreibungstexte gedacht habe, dass es mir ohne besser gefallen würde, wenn man seine eigene Phantasie spielen lassen kann und sich selbst Denken kann, was der Protagonist denkt.Interceptornoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1101389180221568079.post-76810192818048575092012-05-24T21:18:14.163+01:002012-05-24T21:18:14.163+01:00Tremendous work. Got the app last week and have pu...Tremendous work. Got the app last week and have purchased the extra stuff-- totally top notch. LOVE the sketch version of your efforts. I would encourage all who have in interest in the process of creating art to buy the in-app features. I haven't bought a contemporary comic -- paper or digital -- in years, and now I'm anxious for part 3 to go on sale. I check every day. Twice a day!Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05452047510844339361noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1101389180221568079.post-90056254841379980562012-05-23T04:58:37.467+01:002012-05-23T04:58:37.467+01:00This is the most delightful online graphic novel t...This is the most delightful online graphic novel that I have ever had the pleasure of reading. I await chapter 4 with great anticipation.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1101389180221568079.post-90491321010842219312012-05-21T09:19:50.940+01:002012-05-21T09:19:50.940+01:00Certainly! The Wormworld Saga is a Trilogy and eve...Certainly! The Wormworld Saga is a Trilogy and every part of it will consist of about 20 chapters. So, I better get to work again! ;)Daniel Lieskehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14606468348038406671noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1101389180221568079.post-24602387878712113972012-05-21T09:18:15.971+01:002012-05-21T09:18:15.971+01:00Hey, Andreas! Ich werde das Mal als Anfrage an die...Hey, Andreas! Ich werde das Mal als Anfrage an die Entwickler weiterleiten. Klingt nach einem Bug. Danke für die Meldung!Daniel Lieskehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14606468348038406671noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1101389180221568079.post-71626822662268883782012-05-20T16:09:41.030+01:002012-05-20T16:09:41.030+01:00Hey Daniel, keep up the great work!
May i ask how...Hey Daniel, keep up the great work!<br /><br />May i ask how many chapters you have in mind?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1101389180221568079.post-36185998813954173002012-05-17T11:32:45.217+01:002012-05-17T11:32:45.217+01:00LOVED every second/pixel of it!!! Can't wait f...LOVED every second/pixel of it!!! Can't wait for 4!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1101389180221568079.post-38555595378603382282012-05-10T06:10:11.578+01:002012-05-10T06:10:11.578+01:00Hallo Daniel,
eine Frage. Ist es normal, dass die ...Hallo Daniel,<br />eine Frage. Ist es normal, dass die App nur in Verbindung mit Internet funktioniert?<br />Ich habe ein Acer Iconia Tab a510 mit android 4.0<br />Sobald ich kein Internet habe und die app starten will schließt sie sich sofort wieder. Hoffe nicht, dass es so beabsichtigt ist. Sieht aber auch nach einem Absturz aus.Andreashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01100201540880415071noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1101389180221568079.post-37555102217639849352012-05-08T20:10:24.981+01:002012-05-08T20:10:24.981+01:00Wow, einfach genial Daniel... Jedes Bild könnte ei...Wow, einfach genial Daniel... Jedes Bild könnte ein artwork für sich sein. <br />Jetzt brauche ich nur noch eine Kreditkarte, dann kann ich mir die collectors edition für mein android tablet holen.Andreashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01100201540880415071noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1101389180221568079.post-20639430455595189392012-05-08T17:30:19.694+01:002012-05-08T17:30:19.694+01:00I think, that this is a really great idea!I think, that this is a really great idea!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1101389180221568079.post-10618135208607947322012-05-07T19:49:06.240+01:002012-05-07T19:49:06.240+01:00Absolutely amazing!! I love the way the Wormworld ...Absolutely amazing!! I love the way the Wormworld is presented. Beautiful, exotic, and overwhelming all at the same time. I think you are successful at leaving a powerful impression of Wormworld on the reader. Obviously, Jonas is going to have the adventure of his life! Can't wait to find out what happens next!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1101389180221568079.post-81630440527992905662012-05-06T21:49:15.836+01:002012-05-06T21:49:15.836+01:00Whenever I read a story or watch a movie and I que...Whenever I read a story or watch a movie and I question the way it is being told, I always try to put myself in the position of the protagonist. If you are objective and look at what a young boy would do and think to himself in such as situation, I think you nailed it right on the head, Daniel. It's hard to find the right balance in a fast paced scene, it shouldn't feel slow but it should be rushed either...<br /><br />It's great to see readers being this frank and up-front, very refreshing as the comments are also constructive. <br /><br />I would just have one this to say: congrats on hitting your deadline in such splendid manner!Wouterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08357934232982379530noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1101389180221568079.post-24474145713157258702012-05-06T00:31:02.333+01:002012-05-06T00:31:02.333+01:00Fantastic accomplishment. You should be proud of ...Fantastic accomplishment. You should be proud of your work. Well doneJaylumXhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333344868731453933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1101389180221568079.post-17082296916362398042012-05-04T19:31:35.063+01:002012-05-04T19:31:35.063+01:00This is a beautiful chapter!!! I really love this ...This is a beautiful chapter!!! I really love this :)Sir Crazylothttp://www.sircrazylot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1101389180221568079.post-66329976944056089992012-05-04T15:21:36.640+01:002012-05-04T15:21:36.640+01:00only one thing to say on this amazing new chapter....only one thing to say on this amazing new chapter...<br />AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(if i put more exclamation marks here then my computer will explode, so imagine... like... an uncountable amount of exclamation marks:D)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1101389180221568079.post-66327668026543970452012-05-03T16:16:44.314+01:002012-05-03T16:16:44.314+01:00Maybe you can make a sort wikipedia page where you...Maybe you can make a sort wikipedia page where you can write articels about the world.Jaspernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1101389180221568079.post-74422145277370681372012-05-03T08:37:55.232+01:002012-05-03T08:37:55.232+01:00Where it fits I will definitely put details about ...Where it fits I will definitely put details about the world into the story. But I think you always have to be careful to not put too much exposition into a narration. However, I'm already looking for other ways to explain more about the world and this will most likely happen outsite the story.Daniel Lieskehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14606468348038406671noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1101389180221568079.post-71944810549502252342012-05-03T08:34:27.309+01:002012-05-03T08:34:27.309+01:00Meanwhile I identified a few spots in which the na...Meanwhile I identified a few spots in which the narration does not really add to the experience. Generally I need the narration to transport certain things that would be too complicated to express in the action but I also have to watch out to not overuse it just out of habit. Thanks for the feedback! I'm always trying to enhance my work in any aspect.Daniel Lieskehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14606468348038406671noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1101389180221568079.post-71697313286410342432012-05-02T23:24:36.415+01:002012-05-02T23:24:36.415+01:00Wow, these alien vistas are fantastic; I've wa...Wow, these alien vistas are fantastic; I've waited for this since I first heard you were working on chapter 1... <br /><br />The red-green contrasts in the environment are pretty cool - is it a particular type of tree? <br />Will we be hearing anything about the world-building you've done, planning the comic - the flora and fauna, why crystals grow in the forest, that kinda stuff?<br /><br />That mimicry cape was an awesome idea, btw :)Elyandarinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08289813912842329057noreply@blogger.com